One more time!Thanks to all of you who've read any of my works, and even more thanks to those who commented them as well. It really does give me more courage to put up more things I write.
That's it for now, but thanks again!
Merry Christmas.A special moment in time, Repeats once each year.Merry Christmas.
Relatives bringing gifts, Smiles, and conversations.
We remember these times, 24th of December.
A spoiled kid by a present, Fingers ripping it open.
There are plenty of these times, But we have to savour each one –
Who knows how long it will be until the next time?
Mind battle.A battle of no physical damage, None taken, none dealt. A battle and no winner to crown, No winner, no loser.Mind battle.
But as eyes fix on that stain of yours, Hiding beneath the skin of your face, I know there is always a loser in the game, And I know that person is in me – always.
Imperfections make you sweet, Without any reason to cry and weep. And imperfections hide it all, So very carefully, so very strong.
Eyes of hatred, eyes of joy, A mere flip of the card to make you rejoice. Fingers crossed you can keep this up, Or I’ll hav
Scars of my past.I mark these parts for me to see, Not caring if I ruin myself. A never ending process.Scars of my past.
These scars are for me to see. A reminder of the past; The one that is always after me.
I don’t think you know, How hard it is. How painful your eyes are.
Don’t think you know, Don’t even try to sympathize. Don’t make that comment.
I mark these parts on myself, Hardly thinking, hardly care. But these moments are my own,
My only pleasure, my only escape.
Heaven and hell.I’m packing all my things, Crying because you’re not here. I won’t be meeting any of you On my way to heaven.Heaven and hell.
I recklessly throw the picture, The one we took a week ago, I counted each second, I need to be faster.
This bed is stained, Invisible dots of hatred, Invisible dots of affairs. Where did we go wrong?
Everything I want to do, Everything I wanted to do, Gone as you walked out Bailed out on me.
When I arrive at heaven, I’ll never see you again. And I hope that all you’ve done &n
Love shouldn't hurtShe was sprawled across the floor in a state of unawareness Stuck in her own world, believing it was carelessness No one could ever save her, for no one knew her pain So she lay there, silent, listening to the rainLove shouldn't hurt
His hands around her neck, yet she'll always love him All he gave was hate when the lights turned dim Sitting in the darkness, alone with bruises and tears She convinced herself her mind wasn't filling up with fears
She lied, blamed her injuries all on herself Gaining comfort from his picture on the shelf His smiling face staring from the photog
just breathA Jester's TaleI am the Jester Who speaks of no sadness The only thing wrong with meA Jester's Tale
Is a tiny bit of madness
That’s what people believe That’s what they think they know Because none look directly To see what my eyes show
They only see
What the outside shows Only the jokes and laughter The clown with the red nose
I help them with problems Try to give them advice While my problems keep crawling In the dark, like mice
However I keep laughing
Solving problems on my own But one day I’ll need help From th
Distracted
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I have a way with words when I write my works but whenever I go away the way I have with words go away as well.
If my repetitive actions annoys anyone, sorry.
Sarkastisk - Sarcasm
( just breath )[link]
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I have a way with words when I write my works but whenever I go away the way I have with words go away as well.
If my repetitive actions annoys anyone, sorry.
Sarkastisk - Sarcasm
and your work is good, you should have a little more confidence in yourself.
the comments will come, trust me.
pretty soon instead of wanting comments you will be wanting better feedback, more involved dialouge from people.
it just takes time, but the best advice i can give you is to get out there and look at other people, look at what this site has to offer and give feedback yourself.
ill be keeping an eye on you.
have a good one.
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Ameas Qua.
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Ameas Qua.
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I am a Christian!
"Quit you thinking like men. Think like God!"
+sis
+Random.Friendly.Guy.001
-Izzakku Ansoni Hatsuharu-
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I am a Christian!
"Quit you thinking like men. Think like God!"
+sis
+Random.Friendly.Guy.001
-Izzakku Ansoni Hatsuharu-
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